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Writing Task 2 sample: tall apartment blocks, Bands 5–6, 7–8 and 8–9

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

How to use these answers

Plan and write your own essay first (40 minutes, at least 250 words). Then compare it with the three model answers. All three take the same position (tall blocks help, but they are not the best solution on their own); what changes is how clearly the ideas are developed, how precise the vocabulary is, and how accurate the grammar is.

BandWhat makes the difference
5–6A clear position and simple ideas, with some grammar mistakes (left in on purpose: spot them)
7–8Well-developed arguments, real examples, precise vocabulary, few errors
8–9A nuanced thesis, sophisticated and natural language, ideas linked into one coherent argument

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